Evaluating past student's work.

Candidate 1

Planning and Research

Strenghs

- Well documented

-Good use of examples

-Fairly decent amount of detail

Weaknesses

-Needs to include more detail in certain areas

-Needs more explanation

I would have given him a 13 out of 20 for his planning and research.

Construction

Strenghs

-Good story line

-Good use of location

-Good sound effects

Weaknesses

-To much typography

-Better quality of editing

I would mark him some where in the region of mid 30's out of 60 for his construction.

Evaluation

Strenghs

-Terminology

-Understanding of the task

-Well presented

-Good evaluations on his annotations

Weaknesses

-More detail

-More explaining in how he could have developed his production.

I would give him 14 out of 20 for his evaluation.

Candidate 2

Planning and Research

Strenghs

-Good detail

-Good explanation

-Good use of research

-Developed examples

I would would give 20 out of 20 for his planning and research.

Construction

Strenghs

-Good use of variety of shots

-Good sound effects

-Good use of locations

-Editing

-Typography

I would give 60 out of 60 for his contruction

Evaluation

Strenghs

-Good terminology

-Good examples

-Explanation

-Acknowledgement of his mistakes

Weaknesses

-More detail in his written work.

i would give 19 out of 20 for his evaluation.